Re : Weekend Update!!! -- Jessica
quite honestly, i think you're doing great as you are. i've enjoyed what you've written thus far and hope to see more. of course, as an individual who i think has (just like everyone else on the boards) a distinctive feel for the fetish, i'd like to see the mother character dress herself sexier (one of those with a thing for leather, i am) and paint her nails long, and maybe use her smoking as a sexual force outside her relationship with her son. and if i might ask, please don't include any of the smoke you to sleep stuff. i understand that that does it for a lot of people- especially on this board- but i feel like not every story has to include it.
thanks, and i hope to see more.
jeff
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