Re : VS STORY (PT 11) -- JOEY FAKENAME
Well, I must say, that that was really well done. I guess our hero will be able to smoke to his hearts content now. And this seems to be the climax of the story, and I think both the readers and the hero should be satisfied.Maybe, if you ever have more time, the sexy blonde from the yellow pages and the realtor could have fun with Joey at one of those Chamber of Commerce mixers? Thanks for a fun ride.
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