Re : VS STORY (PT 5) -- JOEY FAKENAME
Well, so far, I give the story 4 and a half stars, out of 5!
I think it is very realistic, and I am sure that many males her can relate to being attracted to one of their Mom's younger friends, who happened to be sexy smokers. (I my case, the wife of a neighbor who had remarried after his first wife had died. He owned a few beauty salons, and he remarried to this total younger hottie. I remember watching tv with her one time in particular, while sitting on the couch, and I know that she was deliberately blowing her smoke towards me. She must have been the sexiest beautician in the whole salon.)I also have fond memories (although all too brief) of this total knockout that had opened her own clothing store, I think, after a divorce. Wow, I would have loved to be her secretary any day! One time she just must have returned from washing her gorgeous long and highlighted hair, and it looked dark and a bit curly. She was sitting at her desk/register and had just lit a cigarette. She actually apologized for having wet hair, although I suspect she must have known, that to me, a boy about the same age as the one in this story, she looked like a million bucks. Very nicely written. Hopefully there will be ten more chapters.
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